Do you like food nice for eyes? We have just started a brand new web
about food garnishing and now we are inviting people to join us.. In
October there will be a contest with prizes. When you submit a nice
tip, you have a good chance to win a set of garnishing tools or a
book.

If you are interested, please check http://www.howtogarnish.com/

Any suggestions on what to improve are very welcome..

Thanks & Enjoy!

Cody

On Sep 26, 8:13*am, wrote:
> Do you like food nice for eyes? We have just started a brand new web
> about food garnishing and now we are inviting people to join us. Any suggestions on what to improve are very welcome...snip
The radish mice are a kick! Suggestion: Have all of your text
edited. There are several incorrect word choices and very poor
sentence structure overall.
....Picky

wrote:

> Any suggestions on what to improve are very welcome..

You should stop calling your ****ing site a "web", for one.

-sw